Sunlight on flowerBowed by the gentle breezeEvidence of Spring
the stars have fallen
to hide beneath the ocean’s
oopsie… [blush] thought this was a public poetry post-type site… sorry to intrude ;)
All comments and posts are welcome. *smile* Including orginal works, if you care to post them. Thanks!
I really like this haiku, Jason. Keep writing them.
Here is Elena Naskova’s page on Simply Haiku – she is my favourite haiku writer:http://www.poetrylives.com/SimplyHaiku/SHv2n4/haiku/elena_naskova.html
And here are a few of my own:http://www.voiceinthedesert.org.uk/weblog/archives/poems/index.html